In 2012 I hope for sparkling snow that is as white as a cloud. If it snows I will:
- go sleighing over the icy field by my nan’s
- build a humungous snowman with a tiny head
- throw snowballs when my mom and dad do not see
- throw fake snowballs because it makes me laugh when my dog Molly thinks that they are real balls.
When Molly gallops like a pony after the snowball, she tumbles over and gets snow on her nose. She pursues me all around the frosty trees until I give her a real ball.
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Ian Braisby
/ December 22, 2011Really enjoyed reading this, your descriptions made me feel as though I was in a snowy park with you doing all these things.
Aunty Sally-Jayne
/ December 22, 2011You have used some lovely similes here Phoebe, and I love the idea of a huge snowman with a tiny head. If we get some snow this winter I will have to come to the park with you to see Molly trying to chase the snowballs.
Diane Watson
/ December 22, 2011What a fab story Phoebe. Made me want to join you chasing after Molly.
Jennifer
/ December 23, 2011Phoebe I can picture the scene. I see a very happy family in the sparkling snow. The description of Molly galloping in the snow made me laugh. I am very impressed with your choice of words too. Well done and keep it up.
stephen richards
/ December 23, 2011What a lovely little story. You had packed so much in . It made me feel as if it was real.
Ron
/ December 24, 2011I love the story, especially your choice of adjectives. It makes me wish for some snow this Christmas which is unusual as I don’t particularly like cold weather. If it does snow perhaps I’ll join in the fun.
Susie
/ December 30, 2011What lovely use of language! I can really picture the “sparkling snow” and I would LOVE to help you build your “humongous snowman”. 🙂
Caroline Skudder
/ December 31, 2011How nice Phoebe! We had some snow here but we couldn’t do all this!
Emma Skudder
/ December 31, 2011Great ideas. I would throw snow balls with you!
Kelly Skudder
/ December 31, 2011I’m like you. I like all these things
Martin Skudder
/ December 31, 2011Good story. I love makinf snow balls. Keep writing!
Mrs Skinner
/ January 2, 2012Hello Phoebe!
Now, I don’t like the way the pavements are all slippery when it snows but this wonderful description has made me see that snow can be fun. I do hope you will continue to write for the 100WC in the new year!
Clare Powell
/ January 2, 2012Happy New Year to you Phoebe. This is a well thought out piece of writing, your word choice and use of similes makes your writing interesting to read. Snow can be really fun to play in, it sounds like Molly enjoys it too.
Have a great 2012.
Clare Powell (Team 100 WC)
Megan
/ January 4, 2012Well done on this 100 WC entery Phoebe! I liked how you used a list in your story. I bet that really makes you laugh when your dog runs after fake snowballs! It made me laugh just reading it! Keep writing like this and one day you will become a star. Maybe next time try to add more adjectives in your writing. Keep up the great work!
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ventahl
/ January 6, 2012Could tell you really like February’s blanket, Phoebe. Wishing you a white winter, but keep the snow up north …
Amelie
/ January 25, 2012Sounds really awesome Phoebe!!! I would really love to do that to!!!
What type of dog is Molly?
Is she a dog?
Phoebe I love your dream and I hope it comes true for you!
From Amelie
courtney
/ January 25, 2012I realy like your comment it is fantastic i realy like the snowball fight and i hope your dream comes traw
illora
/ January 25, 2012Phoebe your dreams are the same as mine, but i’ve done all that in canada i just want to do it in plymouth. and what type of dog is Molly
paige harris
/ January 25, 2012Hi, phoebe
That is quite alot of wishes. I wish that I could do all those fun stuff